But if I’d said: Yesterday I met a man at a party and suddenly he said something - there’s a crack in that man’s personality like a gap in a dam, and through that gap the future might pour in a different shape - terrible perhaps, or marvellous… [Doris Lessing, The Golden Notebook]
This was fantastic. Would be amazing if it were a real book I could buy and treasure and pore over. I was in raptures at how naturalistic and lucid your dialogue is; I could hear Michelle's voice ringing in my ears. Very special readerly experience. Everything down to the betting shop, the women falling out of the night-club: you are very very good at this.
Bravo, Lily. Really great
Thank you Xx
This was fantastic. Would be amazing if it were a real book I could buy and treasure and pore over. I was in raptures at how naturalistic and lucid your dialogue is; I could hear Michelle's voice ringing in my ears. Very special readerly experience. Everything down to the betting shop, the women falling out of the night-club: you are very very good at this.
Thank you so much! <3